Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree
It is argued that modern communication technology
iss
having some Correct your spelling
is
disadvantage
influences on relationships, especially social Replace the word
disadvantageous
relationship
. In my opinion, Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
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some points about Change the verb form
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the disadvantage
disadvantage
effects of modern communication. Replace the word
disadvantageous
Firstly
, people
who want to make friends
in
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on
internet
can easily sign in any
online Change preposition
to any
pgaes
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page
such
as Facebook,....
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...
friends
are very toxic.they are not like in some picture
which they update Change the form of the verb
pictures
in
the Change preposition
on
internet
.they give you some harmful websites and take your money away, or some people
accused you of something they did,etc. Secondly
, a person who Add a missing verb
is addict
addict
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addicts
internet
don’t
want to talk with real Change the verb form
doesn’t
people
,Correct word choice
and don’t
don’t
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doesn’t
want
communicate Add the particle
towant
wuth
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with
friends
or family,relatives
,... They are just Correct word choice
or relatives
interesting
in Replace the word
interested
people
in
the Change preposition
on
internet
. Although
people
are real or not real in social
, they want to talk with them.
In conclusion, modern communication technology Replace the word
society
have
a lot of benefits like Change the verb form
has
connect
everyone from everywhere Change the verb form
connecting
in
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on
earth
,.. but some Add an article
the earth
people
are not use
if Change the verb form
are not using
right
purpose. I believe that Correct article usage
the right
internet
will become the most important device to make Correct article usage
the internet
friends
if we know how to use it for the
good purpose, Correct article usage
apply
not
depend on it too much.Correct word choice
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite