With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, developments in health

care

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becoming more advanced and reliable.

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this

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advancements are on

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way

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evolution, the number of

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society

has to take

care

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is

also

increasing. Some

people

give the opinion that

society

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taking

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older

people

when the time comes that they cannot do their activities of daily living independently. On one hand, the majority can cope

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with the continuous inclination of elders as years go by, in a way that more resources of help and support can be found with other

people

as well as

from technology.

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, research articles and journals can be easily found

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the internet, accessible communication to health

care

providers where they can just book an online consultation in the comforts of their home rather than queuing

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line all day long and videos, testimonies and testimonies from experienced caregivers are can

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be found on various social media platforms. All of these can help

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society

to make fine adjustments in helping older

people

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their needs.

On the other hand

, the government can give their support by means of pensions and charities and donations.

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, in most countries,

people

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their retirement age can start to receive their monthly allowance

that is

based on their contributions from the time that they are still working. The Government and its officials show empathy to older

people

by giving a charitable sum of money to non-government organizations, programs and campaigns and if it is not money, they provide a

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worth of groceries, medicines and other necessities

such

as toiletries, sanitary wipes and pads and so much more. Through these various ways, the

people

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care

for

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the elders will not feel alone and abandoned. Though it can be physically tiring,

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what matters the most is that they get enough different reinforcement

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that, they can continue to help prolong life, ease the pain and enjoy the remaining days of the

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.

To conclude

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society

to take

care

of the older generation.

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, even though

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people

’s population may continue to grow, might as well the support and resources will persist that can suffice both needs of the one

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giving and receiving

care

.