With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, developments in health
care
is
becoming more advanced and reliable. Change the verb form
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advancements are on Change the determiner
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their
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evolution, the number of Change preposition
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elderlies
that Replace the word
elderly
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society
has to take care
for
is Change preposition
of
also
increasing.
Some people
give the opinion that society
has a big part on
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in
care
of the
older Correct article usage
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people
when the time comes that they cannot do their activities of daily living independently. On one hand, the majority can cope up
with the continuous inclination of elders as years go by, in a way that more resources of help and support can be found with other Change preposition
apply
people
as well as
from technology. For example
, research articles and journals can be easily found in
the internet, accessible communication to health Change preposition
on
care
providers where they can just book an online consultation in the comforts of their home rather than queuing on
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in
a
line all day long and videos, testimonies and testimonies from experienced caregivers are can Correct article usage
apply
also
be found on various social media platforms. All of these can help the
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society
to make fine adjustments in helping older people
for
their needs.
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On the other hand
, the government can give their support by means of pensions and charities and donations. For example
, in most countries, people
in
their retirement age can start to receive their monthly allowance Change preposition
at
that is
based on their contributions from the time that they are still working. The Government and its officials show empathy to older people
by giving a charitable sum of money to non-government organizations, programs and campaigns and if it is not money, they provide a month
worth of groceries, medicines and other necessities Change noun form
month's
such
as toiletries, sanitary wipes and pads and so much more. Through these various ways, the people
whose
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take
care
for
the elders will not feel alone and abandoned. Though it can be physically tiring, Change preposition
of
but
what matters the most is that they get enough different reinforcement Remove the conjunction
apply
by
that, they can continue to help prolong life, ease the pain and enjoy the remaining days of the Change preposition
apply
elderlies
.
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elderly
To conclude
, there are various ways to help the
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apply
society
to take care
of the older generation. Through
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that
, even though Correct pronoun usage
apply
elder
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the elder
people
’s population may continue to grow, might as well the support and resources will persist that can suffice both needs of the one whose
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apply
care
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