To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
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demands
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demand
food
goes
on the same pattern as well. Some Correct subject-verb agreement
go
individual
give the opinion of including Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
insects
as one
source of food
but others find it not only unhealthy but as will
as has a negative impact Correct your spelling
well
in
the environment.
Nowadays, the growing Change preposition
on
demands
to find another Fix the agreement mistake
demand
food
source is becoming rampant as the number of people continuous
to increase. Replace the word
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way to answer
it is that insects
are being considered to consume on the table. Although
,
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insects
are already part of the human’s
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human
food
chain, it is still questionable how edible it
can be and safe to eat. Some people believe that it can bring harm to the Correct pronoun usage
they
overall
health of an individual when consumed. Snails for
example, Add the comma(s)
,for
carries
numerous micro-sized parasitic worms that when eaten, Correct subject-verb agreement
carry
it
can travel up to the person’s brain Correct pronoun usage
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that
can be very detrimental and soon will lead to death.
Another issue is Correct pronoun usage
which
of
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if
insects
were to be consumed it will greatly affect the balance between nature and human being
. For an instance, bees. Bees have a vital role in pollination Fix the agreement mistake
beings
that is
very crucial for the production of fruits, vegetables
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and vegetables
as well as
maintaining the temperature of a certain place. If bees will be dedicated for humans to be consumed
, no other Replace the word
consumption
insects
can fulfill
their roles in the environment. It can be Change the spelling
fulfil
one
answer
for food
scarcity but finding a solution for one
problem might open a new dilemma.
To conclude
, the suggestion for making insects
as
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one
of the food
sources as
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to
answer
food
shortage is a topic with still a long way discussion. It may have Change preposition
to food
considered
as an Add a missing verb
been considered
answer
but various considerations have to take upon to
before accepting Change preposition
apply
this
as a resolution.Submitted by kmaegalilee on
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