Some people think that taking care of the environment is the responsibility of individuals but others think that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether individuals should take responsibility

of

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the

environmental

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related to protection has been raising a lot of debates.

On the contrary

, others insist on the opinion that

government

should look after

environment

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the environment

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because they

have

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already

pay

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tax income annually. To start with, transport has

became

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the main impact

to

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the

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environmental damage which create

karbon

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carbon

dioxide that pollutes the air. People cannot

lives

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without vehicles

such

as cars, buses or trains nowadays because it is essential in reducing the distance between their destination.

However

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they are urged to use public transport on short trips which

is

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more

enviroment

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environment

friendly.

For example

, they can walk,

cycling

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or take buses when they go to work and study. By doing so, everyone leads to create less pollution and many a little makes a mickle.

Furthermore

, only

participation

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of

government

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the government

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can increase the success rate of

protect

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protecting

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environment

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the environment

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. They can

fine

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find

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the industry which has not installed

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a filter

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filter

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on their emission. Without the monitoring of

government

, most factories will only prioritise their profit margin over sustainability because their equipment will

increased

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their cost and may need to replan their budget. To solve

this problems

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this problem

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,

local

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council

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can provide subsidies to those who are qualified and reward them. In conclusion, I would maintain that only a combination of

government

and individuals can

leads

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to

succeed

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in preventing

further

damage to the environment.