At present time , employees fail to communicate or to maintain synergy in work place due to theoretical knowledge in educational institutions. To what extent do you agree ?

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fail to communicate or
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maintain synergy in
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as they lack these
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. Dependency on theoretical knowledge
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of obtaining practical knowledge in educational institutions can be identified as one of the major
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of
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problem. People in
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current time , seem to run after obtaining
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. They do not focus on developing their
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along with
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their studies as they think it is not economically
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to them. Rather they often label developing
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as a waste of time.
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they dedicate their entire lives towards memorizing their textbooks to score a handsome
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in examinations.
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a good degree in their evaluations and remain delusional about obtaining a good job with a handsome amount of salary.
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, they often tend to forget that it is almost impossible to taste success in
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field without having
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skills
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to communicate or to
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as a team in harmony.
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, in most
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it is observed that the topper of the daas is unable to prove himself as a worthy teacher
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a mediocre student can turn out to be the favourite teacher of his students
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communication
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and leadership
skills
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.
Communication
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and
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work
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are the pillars behind the success of any company.
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two basic qualities among the
employees
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may create a huge imbalance in the
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work field
which eventually might lead
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the fall of that particular company. Without proper leadership
skill
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, the boss or representative might fail to establish proper
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with the
employees
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.
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may prevent the
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to maintain workplace synergy. The
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will ultimately run out of innovative ideas which
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necessary to keep the company running. All successful companies viz Apple, Microsoft, Google etc smelled success as their
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managed to develop and implement those two major
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. In conclusion, we can reach
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decision that, it is very necessary to develop
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and
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work
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in
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work
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field and it can be possible if our students moved out from theory oriented teaching method and got indulged in developing
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