this graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls ar Starmoth School from 2006 to the present.
This
chart appearance about graduates of different sex who study books in their library. from 2006 to the present. In this
,Add an article
an
the
this
graph carefully and also
give an appropriate analogy.
As can be observed this
is a fluctuating graph. Firstly
, this
chart began in 2009. as can estimate the number of girls
who read books was only 22 people
. While
the boys
were more active. 44 people
of
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apply
boys
had reddened the book from the library. In 2010 both groups had a slight increase in the past. The number of boys
got to 80 people
. And also
the girls
had 40 people
in the chart. This
trend continued until 2011. in that year this
school had spectacular changes in girls
. because both of them were the same. And were 100 people
. The girl's group had a sharp rise in that year. In 2012 the number of boys
had a gradual decrease. They went to 80 people
on the graph. But on the other hand
, girls
went up to 140 people
in that year. Girls
had a dramatic rise between 2011 and 2012.
Overall
, both groups had ascending trend until 2011. but in last
, the girls
' group overcome the boys
finally
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