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In many countries today, parents are able to send their children to same-sex schools or co-ordinated schools.Some believe that the children going to single-sex schools might have dissadvantages later on.To what extent do you believe?

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Nowadays, parents have many options of
schools
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 to choose from when deciding to send their
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 to
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, whether it is a single-sex school or a co-educational.
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, many believe that there are disadvantages to choosing same-sex
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. Despite many different opinions, I think that
children
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 in single-
gender
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schools
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 can have better learning and emotional experiences and
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 they are better.
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 with,
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 in single-sex
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 are able to concentrate on their studies better because they're not destructed by socializing with the opposite
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. They spend more time thinking about the curriculum subjects rather than wasting time on impressing male students.
Children
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 can benefit from student-teacher interactions in
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gender
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school
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.
Children
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 find it easier to express themselves in front of the same
gender
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 students and teachers.
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, it is easier to talk about our emotions,
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and problems
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 associated with our own
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 in front of
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same sex
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 audience.
Although
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 there are many advantages to choosing
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single-sex
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 there are several drawbacks too.
Children
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 have less interaction
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the opposite members of
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society,
firstly
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, they can miss out
onflearning
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on learning
of learning
 from one another and
secondly
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 limited communication with the opposite
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 might create a barrier and communication difficulties later on in their lives.
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, they might not know how to handle relationships. Males might not know how females operate and vice versa.
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, parents now have a choice of single-
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schools
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 or co-ordinated
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.
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, some people have concerns regarding same-sex
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. In my opinion, single-sex
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 are more
study oriented
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 and
children
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 can learn more.

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