The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the life pattern of honeybees. It depicts how these
type
of bees grow from merely an Fix the agreement mistake
types
egg
to a
fully-functional honeybees.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Overall
, honeybees’ lifecycle is consisting of six stages. It take
34-36 Change the verb form
takes
days
for them to become an
Correct article usage
apply
adult
bee
. Their life begins with laying an egg
or two and ends up meeting another adult
to help them lay an egg
again. Therefore
, the cycle continues.
To begin
with, female honeybees lay an egg
or two every three days
. The adult
bee
may incubate the egg
until it hatches after a week or up to 10 days
. Five days
later, their offspring will have its first encounter with the world by going out of its shell. It will then
grow twice as much as its size from its newborn state and after nine days
, it will grow nine times more. By this
stage, they are now called the “nymph moults”
Second
to the Correct article usage
The second
last
stage is when the young adult
bee
merges with another bee
with
the age as it is. For them to become mature and an official Change preposition
of
full grown
Add a hyphen
full-grown
adult
honey bee
, it will take them Fix the agreement mistake
bees
for
four Change preposition
apply
days
to reach that state and so, the cycle repeats.Submitted by kmaegalilee on
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