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Traffic jam brings a lot of problems to our life. What are the problems? What are the solutions?

#traffic #jam #life
Transportation is extremely important in our day-to-day activities. in
this
 fast-growing
world
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 the need
of
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 humans has increased dramatically leading to an increase in the need for transportation. several decades ago, travelling was mainly dependent on public
transport
.
However
, the development of advanced technology, the increased number of automobile manufacturers, long waiting times and lack of comfortable in public
transport
 compelled people to buy their own cars.
Therefore
 , there is increasing huge gridlock congestion
is
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prevailing in the main cities in the world during the
last
 three decades. These movement congestions are a new headache for passengers regardless of the type of vehicle they are travelling. Life in the main cities like Tokyo-Japan, New york - the USA and New Delhi in India
is
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 becoming a mess
due to
 the increased number of personal cars. There was
a
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massive
transport
 congestion documented in China a few years ago,
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 the road for consecutive 9 days.
Meanwhile
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this
 kind of congestion leads to severe air pollution as well.
Therefore
, most of the developed countries are seriously thinking of some permanent solution to
this
 problem. Public
transport
 services
such
 as busses, trains and Metros should be increased in number and should ensure the basic facilities. Fair for the travelling must be reasonable and they should be easily accessible. Share vehicle systems need to be encouraged where
a
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 auto owner will pick up two or three other passengers in his or her motor vehicle who are travelling to the same destination or same route. They can share the fuel cost as well. Another important way to reduce the gridlock block is to construct new expressways for long-distance travellers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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