The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how solar panels can be of use to produce
electricity
as
it
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they
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be utilized for domestic use. Its main source
is heat
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is heated
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from the sun and various mediums to convert it into
electricity
.
Overall
, there are five steps to generate
electricity
from the sun’s heat energy. Solar panels as the most important material needed for
this
process to occur.
To begin
with, as the sun gives its heat during daytime, the solar panels that are recommended to be placed on top of the roof of each
houses
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house
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absorbs the force and
turns
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turn
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it into DC current.
This
current passes through an inverter which transforms the
then
DC into AC current. The inverter controls the
electricity
as well as
the
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its
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production of it. After the conversion, the one that distributes the
electricity
for the entire house is the electrical panel. If the electrical panel already provided enough current
source
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sources
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for the whole house, it sends its extra solar
electricity
to the grid through the utility meter. In cases of emergency like black-outs or when spare
electricity
is needed, the utility grid comes
into
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to
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rescue
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the rescue
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, in which the process repeats itself.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • solar panels
  • electricity
  • domestic use
  • renewable energy
  • photovoltaic cells
  • sunlight
  • generate
  • store
  • inverter
  • power grid
  • environmentally friendly
  • efficient
  • cost-effective
  • sustainable
  • reliable
  • alternative
  • traditional
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • emissions
  • solar energy
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • reduces
  • dependency
  • conclusion
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