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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

#generations #people #life
In recent years, a debate regarding some traditional concepts of
life
 has emerged.
In particular
, some people argue that
older
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 generation’s
ideas
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 world. I think that
this
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 because
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 society has seen a lot of changes. In
this
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this
 debate and opinion will be given. It is undoubtedly true that some
ideas
 can be
benefical
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beneficial
 for preparing young generations as they were in past years. In fact, many
situations
 in
life
 can be different nowadays, but the concept behind them is the same as in the past.
For example
, some old
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 on how to behave in certain
situations
 or how to evaluate some important decisions in
life
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 to specific
situations
.
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 decisions,
such
 as continuing the studies or proposing after
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 ,now have more possible answers, but the approach to
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them is the same as it was in the past. Given all
this
, it is not
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entirely
 inaccurate to state that traditional
ideas
 can be useful.
On the other hand
,
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 and society have changed so much in recent years that some old opinions are now totally inaccurate.
For instance
, the new
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flexible
 work market, with shorter contracts and the possibility of remote work, made the old idea of finding a workplace after graduation that will be retained for all
life
 not only inaccurate
,
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 but
also
 mislead new workers that now have more opportunities of
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developing
 their careers horizontally.
In addition
, some other
way
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ways
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 of living
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 now surpassed
such
 as the idea of marriage as
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 way to form a family. In conclusion, I think that traditional ways of living could be helpful only if accurately selected and adapted to
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new
situations
. As stated above,
while
 some
istances
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instances
 could be similar on a more fundamental level, others are too different or
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completely
 new. For
this
reasons
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reason
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 traditional
ideas
 should be
selecet
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selected
select
,
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 because
a wrong advice
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wrong advice
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 can be detrimental to a younger
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 world.
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