The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In recent years, a debate regarding some traditional concepts of
life
has emerged. In particular
, some people argue that older
generation’s Correct article usage
the older
ideas
are no more useful in the modern day
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essay, a brief explanation of this
debate and opinion will be given.
It is undoubtedly true that some ideas
can be benefical
for preparing young generations as they were in past years. In fact, many Correct your spelling
beneficial
situations
in life
can be different nowadays, but the concept behind them is the same as in the past. For example
, some old advices
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situations
or how to evaluate some important decisions in life
can be used now, adapted
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decisions, Correct determiner usage
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such
as continuing the studies or proposing after engagement
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this
, it is not entierly
inaccurate to state that traditional Correct your spelling
entirely
ideas
can be useful.
On the other hand
, world
and society have changed so much in recent years that some old opinions are now totally inaccurate. Correct article usage
the world
For instance
, the new felxible
work market, with shorter contracts and the possibility of remote work, made the old idea of finding a workplace after graduation that will be retained for all Correct your spelling
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not only inaccurate,
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also
mislead new workers that now have more opportunities of devolping
their careers horizontally. Correct your spelling
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are
now surpassed Change the verb form
is
such
as the idea of marriage as only
way to form a family.
In conclusion, I think that traditional ways of living could be helpful only if accurately selected and adapted to Add an article
the only
the
new Correct article usage
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. As stated above, while
some istances
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instances
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