Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In many countries, the
governments
believe that growth in economics should be the main important target to achieve, Use synonyms
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others consider that other aspects should Linking Words
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a
same way to develop the Correct article usage
the
country
. In my opinion, developing every aspect of a nation leads to Use synonyms
a
economical growth automatically.
In many countries, the Correct article usage
apply
economy
plays a vital part in terms of the development ofUse synonyms
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the
a
country
. Use synonyms
In other words
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governments
execute various plans and projects in order to stabilise their financial state, because of the competition that they have between nations. Use synonyms
However
, some Linking Words
governments
fail to survive Use synonyms
this
game of power. For an instance, Linking Words
Sri
Lankan government recently took a risk of paying all debts expecting Correct article usage
the Sri
a
growth in the Correct article usage
apply
economy
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,
but ended up resulting Remove the comma
apply
an
economical crisis. Change preposition
in an
As a result
, every other aspect of the Linking Words
country
was dragged down into Use synonyms
a
chaos, because they were concerned about the economics rather than the possibilities of other areas which can indirectly support Remove the article
apply
to
the Change preposition
apply
economy
.
Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the development of a Linking Words
country
is based not only on the Use synonyms
economy
but Use synonyms
also
on many factors Linking Words
such
as agriculture, education, tourism, health etc. These are the facts that directly makeLinking Words
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effect
on
the Change preposition
apply
economy
of a nation. For Use synonyms
an
example, a nation with a great level of agriculture can sustain Correct article usage
apply
their
people and Correct pronoun usage
its
able
to bring more money into the Add a missing verb
be able
country
by exporting the excess. Use synonyms
Similarly
, an educationally enriched Linking Words
country
is able to produce a large number of professionals who are capable of strengthening the financial aspect. If the government can develop the education system, Use synonyms
then
people will not look for foreign educational options, Linking Words
as a
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result
a large amount of money will be saved within the Add a comma
,result
country
. Use synonyms
In addition
, having facilities to improve tourism, could Linking Words
also
lead to Linking Words
build
the Change the verb form
building
economy
in a significant manner, as it Use synonyms
introduce
many job vacancies to the people. Change the verb form
introduces
As
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For
an
instance, Sri Lanka has Correct article usage
apply
a
great tourist attractive locations which can expand the money flow into the Correct article usage
apply
country
.
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To conclude
, nations should not have goals to focus only on economics, and I believe the Linking Words
governments
should make Use synonyms
their
progress Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
areas Change preposition
in
such
as agriculture, education, Linking Words
tourism
too. If they manage to progress on these aspects, Correct word choice
and tourism
consequently
the Linking Words
finance
state will increase tremendously.Replace the word
financial
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