Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries, the

governments

believe that growth in economics should be the main important target to achieve,

while

others consider that other aspects should

also

improve in

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same way to develop the

country

. In my opinion, developing every aspect of a nation leads to

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economical growth automatically. In many countries, the

economy

plays a vital part in terms of the development of

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country

.

In other words

,

governments

execute various plans and projects in order to stabilise their financial state, because of the competition that they have between nations.

However

, some

governments

fail to survive

this

game of power. For an instance,

Sri

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Lankan government recently took a risk of paying all debts expecting

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growth in the

economy

,

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but ended up resulting

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economical crisis.

As a result

, every other aspect of the

country

was dragged down into

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chaos, because they were concerned about the economics rather than the possibilities of other areas which can indirectly support

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the

economy

.

Nevertheless

, the development of a

country

is based not only on the

economy

but

also

on many factors

such

as agriculture, education, tourism, health etc. These are the facts that directly make

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the

economy

of a nation. For

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example, a nation with a great level of agriculture can sustain

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people and

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to bring more money into the

country

by exporting the excess.

Similarly

, an educationally enriched

country

is able to produce a large number of professionals who are capable of strengthening the financial aspect. If the government can develop the education system,

then

people will not look for foreign educational options,

as a

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a large amount of money will be saved within the

country

.

In addition

, having facilities to improve tourism, could

also

lead to

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the

economy

in a significant manner, as it

introduce

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many job vacancies to the people.

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instance, Sri Lanka has

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great tourist attractive locations which can expand the money flow into the

country

.

To conclude

, nations should not have goals to focus only on economics, and I believe the

governments

should make

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progress

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areas

such

as agriculture, education,

tourism

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too. If they manage to progress on these aspects,

consequently

the

finance

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state will increase tremendously.