You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. You have not yet met the neighbor.

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Dear Mr Murod, I hope

this

letter finds

the

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solution . I am writing to you to express my concern related to my your’s children , who

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recently moved to our street and replaced next to my house. I am studying

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Brown University and my exams are coming

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apply

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the next month,

due to

which I had to devote many hours to my studies.

However

, I could not focus on my studies properly

due to

Asad who used to play loud music the whole day and the night. Even I am unable to sleep because of the noise which is coming from your home and it causes a lot of discomfort to me

as well as

my family members as they

also

cannot perform their regular tasks

due to

this

Furthermore

, It prevent me a lot that unfortunately I got very low scores in my

last

semester.

Although

I tried to communicate with your children yet .

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I got no positive response from their side.

Therefore

, It would be really appreciable If you could please ask them about the matter . It would really helpful for me. I hope you pay attention to me and next time I hope your son will not play so loud . Yours Sincerely, Maga Buxarskiy

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Last week, you visited a local supermarket and you got saticfactory service. Write a letter to the supermarket manager to thank. In your letter: - introduce yourself; - say why you are satisfied; - say thank you and write about your future visits.

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