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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. You have not yet met the neighbor.

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Dear Mr Murod, I hope
this
 letter finds
the
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 solution . I am writing to you to express my concern related to my your’s children , who
is
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are
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 recently moved to our street and replaced next to my house. I am studying
in
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at
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 Brown University and my exams are coming
in
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apply
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the next month,
due to
 which I had to devote many hours to my studies.
However
, I could not focus on my studies properly
due to
 Asad who used to play loud music the whole day and the night. Even I am unable to sleep because of the noise which is coming from your home and it causes a lot of discomfort to me
as well as
 my family members as they
also
 cannot perform their regular tasks
due to
this
.
Furthermore
, It prevent me a lot that unfortunately I got very low scores in my
last
 semester.
Although
 I tried to communicate with your children yet .
However
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 I got no positive response from their side.
Therefore
, It would be really appreciable If you could please ask them about the matter . It would really helpful for me. I hope you pay attention to me and next time I hope your son will not play so loud . Yours Sincerely, Maga Buxarskiy
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