The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

some
people
believe that elderly
people
have more experience about living
life
.
While
others claim that having living
life
experience is not the only thing required in the modern world. I partially disagree with the statement that we should not follow older generation ideas,the analysis contained within the following paragraphs of the essay will contain the reasons to follow ideas and not follow them. First of all, As we know that older
generations
of
people
are welcoming and polite in nature. These
people
believe in living simple and peaceful
life
and are concerned with taking care of environmental resources. If younger
generations
will follow and implement their ideas
then
they will be able to preserve their hospitality .
Thus
, following them will add some value to human behaviour.
Secondly
, As the recent world is technology-oriented,want to do everything in a modernized way and elderly
people
are not too much creative . As elderly
people
oppose the exploitation of nature
while
the younger
generations
prefer to be luxurious and want more advances in technology which is even necessary in today's world. In conclusion, In terms of behaving ,others younger
generations
follow them and in case of luxurious
life
and ,advancement they oppose them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional ideas
  • Modern life
  • Younger generations
  • Stability
  • Guidance
  • Foundation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Rigid gender roles
  • Resistance to new technologies
  • Adaptability
  • Innovative solutions
  • Respecting elders
  • Maintaining family bonds
  • Stifle progress
  • Fusion of ideas
  • Outdated values
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