The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph compares the average
emissions
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of carbon dioxide in four countries - the
UK
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,
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal - over a period of 40 years.
It is clear that
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the
UK
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has by far the highest CO2
emissions
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over the period shown. Portugal,
on the other hand
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, had
overall
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the lowest
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,
although
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a slow but steady rise can be observed. In 1967, each inhabitant of the
UK
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produced around 11 metric tonnes of CO2, which was significantly more than people in other regions. Italy and
Sweden
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had average
emissions
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of around 9 and 4.5 respectively. Portugal's residents generated only a negligible amount, just 1 metric tonne per person.
However
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, the
UK
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saw a decrease in CO2
emissions
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by 4 metric tonnes per person after 40 years.
Sweden
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's average
emissions
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peaked in 1977 at over 10 metric tonnes and
then
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gradually declined.
By contrast
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, Italy and Portugal both had more CO2
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. Italy's
emissions
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surpassed
Sweden
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's after 1987, and in 2007 the
emissions
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of Portugal were at the same level as that of
Sweden
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, uk, sweden, co with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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