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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

#people #children #rules #parents #teachers #adulthood
Over the
last
 few ,decades there have been
a
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significant changes in the world. In the modern era, some are thinking that
parents
 should teach the rule to
the
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children
, that control the problem created by them. To some extent it is right, but too much control might irritate
the
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youngsters.
Therefore
,
following
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a proper conclusion. Nowadays,
children
 like to be independent during their teenage period. They are ready to do their work individually.
Parents
 play a vital role in
children
's life. Always the first lesson they taught from their house. So
parents
 should guide the
children
 from their childhood. Making some rules is always good for their future growth. For ,instance
parents
 should keep a particular time for their daily routines Some
children
 didn't like to obey. So
parents
 should teach in a comfortable manner. Generally speaking,
children
 don't like the rules and
regulation
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 given by their
parents
 and society. They don't like someone's advice. But we can crack the
situations
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 in multiple ways.
Firstly
, we want to understand in which state of
mindthe
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mind the
 child is in the situation. Sometimes they will obey if they are in good mood. So
parents
 should understand the current state.
Secondly
, Maybe some
decision
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 taken by them become wrong. In a friendly ,manner
parents
 should deal with the situation.
However
, there are so many ways to control
children
.
Parents
 and society are responsible for what a child does. They should know to handle the New generation.
Children
 are the future of the world. Always motivating and encouraging the
children
 will give a creative youth.
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