You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear

Mr.

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Desai, I am writing

this

letter to you, to ask for permission to take some

time

off

work

as have to complete a course that I am studying. Managing both together is getting a little difficult these days. I am pursuing a diploma in data science which would help me analyse the data more effectively. It would benefit not only me but

also

our company.

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the end of the

course

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I have to

work

on an assignment which involves a lot of research. I am finding

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very hard to manage

work

assignment

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and lectures. Getting some

time

off would help me concentrate on my assignment.

Besides

, I will get

time

to go through more research material and conduct interviews. I will make sure I complete all the tasks that are assigned to me on

time

even if I have to

work

for extended hours. Thank you in advance for understanding my situation and I

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forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Anokhi Desai

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