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The table below gives information about the production of cocoa beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998.

The table below gives information about the production of cocoa beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998.
The table below illustrates information about
cocoa
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 bean manufacturing in six areas from 1992 - 1998. The data has been calibrated for the quantity in
tons
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.
Overall
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, the vast majority of products that South
America
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 and Asia produced most on was in 1998. The lowest cultivation could be seen in Africa and England throughout the year.
To begin
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 with, in 1992, South
America
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 cultivated the most production of
cocoa
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 beans at 1,43,000
tons
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. The cultivation of North and Central
America
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 (46000
tons
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) was
also
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 the highest compared to Africa which manufactured the least (29000
tons
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). It is interesting to note that North and Central
America
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 cultivated an identical fashion of
cocoa
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 beans production at the former and end of the decade (46000
tons
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.) Probing
further
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, Africa experienced a rising style till 1996, the source of commodities overwhelmingly reached 1,1900
tons
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 in 1996;
however
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, in the next two decades, the fashion dropped by 4,000
tons
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. Surprisingly, Asia and Oceania followed an escalation trend and touched a high at (4,36,000, 76890
tons
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) appropriately up to 1998.
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, in 1992, the ratio in England was 56,000
tons
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, but it experienced a drastic fall by 7,000
tons
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.
To conclude
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, it is predicted that the manufacturing of
cocoa
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 beans is Asia dominant.[

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cocoa, tons, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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