Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some

people

believe

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have a crucial role in learn their

children

how they can be the perfect citizen

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their society.

While

,another group think,

schools

are more important to teach them to be a good person for their society.in

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I will discuss both views with some examples and I will give my perspective. It is well-established fact that parents are the best guide for their

children

.

Parent

after their

children

's birth has received enormous duties.First of all,

children

live the earlier ages of their life with their

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and spend more time with them.They

also

, learn and try to imitate their

parent

's behaviours.

For example

,

children

who are brought up in disrupted family they can not grow mentally and they may be more aggressive than other

children

who grow up in friendly families.

in addition

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a parent

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parent

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can learn them how they can be sociable and cooperative

people

through visiting their families and friend

as well as

learn them how they can respect other

people

.

On the other hand

,

schools

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duties in

this

issue should not be taken lightly.In school,

to begin

with,youngsters have

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enormous chance to learn interpersonal social skills to interact with a wide variety of

people

through the time that they spend in school with their classmates and their teachers.The teacher

also

,

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a huge obligation to handle

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important issues.

Secondly

,as we know

schools

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is the first place for

children

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enter after their childhood.It means

schools

and institutions are a simulation of society.School managers and instructors have to provide them

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their future life in the community with some beneficial activities.Some

schools

encourage

children

to participate in social activities or campaigns.For ,instance they persuade

children

to make some gadgets or instruments in the group to promote their teamwork skills and ability to struggle with problematic situations.

To sum up

,In my view,with the cooperation of parents and

schools

we could gain

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desired result.