Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
believe
parent
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have a crucial role in learn their
children
how they can be the perfect citizen
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their society.
While
,another group think,
schools
are more important to teach them to be a good person for their society.in
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I will discuss both views with some examples and I will give my perspective. It is well-established fact that parents are the best guide for their
children
.
Parent
after their
children
's birth has received enormous duties.First of all,
children
live the earlier ages of their life with their
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and spend more time with them.They
also
, learn and try to imitate their
parent
's behaviours.
For example
,
children
who are brought up in disrupted family they can not grow mentally and they may be more aggressive than other
children
who grow up in friendly families.
in addition
,
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a parent
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parent
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can learn them how they can be sociable and cooperative
people
through visiting their families and friend
as well as
learn them how they can respect other
people
.
On the other hand
,
schools
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duties in
this
issue should not be taken lightly.In school,
to begin
with,youngsters have
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enormous chance to learn interpersonal social skills to interact with a wide variety of
people
through the time that they spend in school with their classmates and their teachers.The teacher
also
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a huge obligation to handle
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important issues.
Secondly
,as we know
schools
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is the first place for
children
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enter after their childhood.It means
schools
and institutions are a simulation of society.School managers and instructors have to provide them
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their future life in the community with some beneficial activities.Some
schools
encourage
children
to participate in social activities or campaigns.For ,instance they persuade
children
to make some gadgets or instruments in the group to promote their teamwork skills and ability to struggle with problematic situations.
To sum up
,In my view,with the cooperation of parents and
schools
we could gain
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desired result.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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