the table and charts below give infromation on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of britain. the table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed

the table and charts below give infromation on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of britain. the table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed
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The given table and charts illustrate the police budget and how it was spent in a particular area of Britain for 2017 and 2018. Units are measured in million pound sterling and percentages.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that the police budget and the spending amount on technology increased slightly,
while
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the spending on salaries fell. In terms of the total received from the sources, the National Government was the highest one on giving the cost standing at 175.8 in the beginning before climbing slightly to 177.8 in 2018. The local taxes
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witnessed a slight increase from 91.2 to 102.3,
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the cost from other sources
such
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as grants which was the lowest one stayed constant at 38. Regarding the money distribution, the expenditure on technology experienced a slight growth to exactly 14 in 2018. The salaries expenses dropped slightly by 6,
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the spending on buildings and transport remained steady at 17 during the given period.
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