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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why do you think it is the case? How should children and teenagers be punished?

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Children
 and
teenagers
 are committing more crimes all around the world. In the new generation, there are so many youngsters who do not do anything, and the consequences we can see as a crime ,which is done by them. To some extent, it happens because of some injuries in childhood.
For instance
, if the kid had a problem at 10 years old, indeed, it will come with bad consequences.
Moreover
, there are some
teenagers
 who are getting interested in many things
while
 they are in transitional ages, where those bad situations can be seen.
In addition
,
children
 are interested in gadgets,
hence
 they are surfing in the internet field, by visiting so many websites. Whereby they can face the kind of people who attract their attention to do crazy things or create games with crime plots. There are different ways
which
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 they should be punished. In fact, if parents cannot bring up their
children
, the government should care about them. When
children
 or
teenagers
 have committed crimes, the police will bring them to the juvenile hall, where
children
 will be there as much as it says in the laws.
On the other hand
, if the government cannot change the behaviour of
teenagers
 or
children
, there is another approach.
Such
 the most effective method is to bring the to psychologists because they are able to implement that they are doing bad things in their lives. In conclusion, because of parents who were not polite in their
children
’s childhood, crime can be seen in the future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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