In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

In the future, all vehicles will not require a driver. Everyone onboard will be
passenegers
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passengers
and computers will control vehicles. In
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essay, I will argue that
this
enhancement will lead to fewer accidents
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can lead to job losses.
Humas
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Humans
are prone to errors and driving mistakes can lead to fatal consequences.
Although
people are very
realiable
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reliable
, it is widely known that most
of
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the
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car accidents are caused by
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human error. A part of human
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is influenced by emotions
hence
when someone is in a hurry or angry it is more likely he might crash his car.
Furthermore
, some people are so reckless that they drink alcohol before driving that greatly influences
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reflexes.
Therefore
, if
computure
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computer
computers
were to drive
cars
then
all these issues of emotion and mental states would
disapear
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disappear
as
computures
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computers
follow pure logic and work in the way they are programmed. The
replacment
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replacement
of
drivers
with
computures
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computers
creates unemployment. Automatization is a real threat
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many jobs and personal, bus and truck
drivers
will lose their job
as a consequence
of driverless
cars
. Given that computers are likely to be more
realible
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reliable
and won’t need breaks when driving as
drivers
do, they will cost less to operate and
hence
companies will rather use them than pay humans for driving
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and trucks.
However
, every driver can requalify and find another job or possibly help with
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development and upgrades of
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cars
. In conclusion, I am strongly convinced that the benefit of
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trafic
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traffic
incidents, which means
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lost lives, caused by self-driven
cars
in opposite to human
drivers
far
outweights
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outweighs
the negative of higher unemployment among
drivers
that in the end can be only temporary.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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