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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months -say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his-her help in arranging it

#work #company #six #months #head #office #country #manager #-explain #company’s #-say #-ask #his-her
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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this
 letter
that
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 I want to explain a big desire. I have been
workin
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working
 in your company since 2018.
Last
 month, I accepted a mail for
desing
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design
 project works in the head office. If I have a chance I can relocate to work for six months.
This
 position is very suitable for me because I am very good at
design
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 of electrical installation
project
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. Thanks to
this
my
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skill, I will be
usefull
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useful
 for the head office.
While
 I am working
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this
 job in the
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, my
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best
collague
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colleague
 who is Frank
,
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 will finish my tasks
instead
 of me.
Moreover
, I would like to work
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 overseas country to improve my second language.
Besides
, I believe that it will provide
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me
different
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 job opportunities. If you give me a chance, I would be very happy
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 that. If you send a mail
my
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 manager, he will give me
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 for moving. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Orhan Çanakçı
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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