In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many nations,

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have become a rising

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and

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, the number of prisons

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rocketed, and they believe that it is an effective solution

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problem

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.

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, many individuals believe that educating criminals would be the best method to solve

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issue. In my opinion, I agree that providing education for those criminals is effective

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some extent, but

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insufficient to reduce

crimes

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in a country. The main reason for to increase in

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is the inability to control emotions

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certain experiences.

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, some individuals' minds are corrupted

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society or specific mental health issues. These people cannot be recovered by providing education, but providing therapies for their mental health can be an effective solution.

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, serial killers are impossible to tame by educating about the consequences of murder,

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they should be guided through a rehabilitation program, which is

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not a 100% guaranteed solution.

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, sometimes

crimes

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can be increased based on poor rules and regulations in a country. If punishments are smaller in the law schema,

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the more opportunities to commit a crime.

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, in some countries even murderers

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from the law by paying a small compensation or spending a short time in prison,

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, the number of

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has increased. In order to decrease the crime rate, the law should be strengthened to its maximum, new laws should be introduced and should be treated everyone equally.

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,

crimes

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become a vital

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in the whole world, and governments should take actions

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as introducing new laws, strengthening existing laws, providing education to criminals and facilitating them with

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counselling

or any other therapies to mitigate

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problem

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