The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words

The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

150 words
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The maps illustrate the projected changes in an industrial zone in the town of Norbiton.
Firstly
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, it can be noted how the roundabout at the centre of the
area
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is planned to have two more exits, one pointing to the north and the other one to the north-west,
while
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in the southern one, which connects the road to the town to
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area
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, a new roundabout will be constructed on the place of the actual crossing.
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, in the vicinity of the roundabout, there will be some shops in the southwest and a medical centre in the southeast.
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to that, the new exit on the north-east will conduce to some residences.
On the other hand
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, in the east field, where now there are some factories, some significant changes are planned.
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,
at the end
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of the street, there will be a school,
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along the avenue there will be houses and a playground. In the northern part of the
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, where now there are only farmlands, a new road and bridge over the river will be built, creating another residential zone.
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this
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reason, the farmland
area
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will be reduced to only the northeast. In conclusion, it can be stated how major changes are planned. In fact, the space will have some great developments, probably to give to the new inhabitants some necessary services and accommodations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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