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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Opting for the right
subjects
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 at university would be difficult enough for adolescents, because of less experience in making the appropriate decisions. In these, situations they go for some advice in selecting the right choice. But there is a mixed opinion about students opting curriculum which they like the most or going around the course work which results be useful in future. In the
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 essay we would be discussing both views and draw conclusions towards the best opinion.
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 with, opting for the course work liked by a
student
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 would be a much better way when compared to the opposite because in the end. It is the
student
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 who needs to graduate with flying colours.
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, a teenager selecting
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 related to arts
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 his/her
passion
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 and interest might end up getting a job which is less paid compared to the
subjects
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 yielding a high salary. But there is satisfaction job with him where most of them fail to procure it. It might be a slow journey towards being successful and making money. But,
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 he/she will reach the point
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 the determination, commitment and
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 towards the job they like. At,
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 we see most of the successful people saying we need to follow our
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, no matter what the struggle we face. It only cares about the
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 and dedication that we have.
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, students blindly go with the flow of trends to opt for the
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, thinking to yield a good
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 in the future is more like a poker game.
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, a
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 selecting an engineering subject and keeping thoughts of having successful
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 just because of the curriculum is going to be a nostalgic situation throughout his
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. Because a person being not passionate or loved towards the things he/she carries out will be just leading a boring
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 without any goals.
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 leads to disparate lifestyle routines.
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 adolescents selecting the
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 giving a thought of useful in the future should not be the only reason
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 to these he/she should have some love,
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 to achieve in the respective fields and dedication towards the subject is main quality a
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 should have. In my, opinion students should go with the course work which they like the most.

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