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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking
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risk
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 by
people
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 in their both personal and professional issues is essential. In
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 I will scrutinize its benefits and drawbacks before forming any conclusion
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. To embark on, it is prevalently said that “no
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 no gain”.
People
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 who are mostly optimistic and zealous tend to take
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the risk
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risk
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 not only in their corporate life but
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 in their private life. To cite an example, in
stock
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 market, traders earn huge
profit
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profits
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 by investing
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amount
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 of money
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 possibility of losing all the money exists there.
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, if we look at any invention
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 as electricity, mobile phone, solar panel, etc., we will definitely find
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risk taking
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 histories behind these. Had businessmen or scientists, knowing the situation where uncertainty involved, not taken steps for new discoveries and innovations, our society would have hardly seen any development in their lives. On contrary, taking
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the extreme
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 level of
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 is not always a wise decision.
People
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 have to be calculative when they initiate
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something new and different.
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, in
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 market, the value of business analysts who are involved with market intelligence and
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 management are increasing day by day as company CEO and Directors are not in favour to invest in
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project
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 without proper judgment.
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, taking higher
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risk
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risks
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 is one kind of
gabling
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gambling
 which is not encouraged by society. A bunch of examples can be found
from
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 our society where
people
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 lost everything taking irrational decisions in their
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.
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,
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 some disadvantages
involved
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 with
risk
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but
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without taking
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risk
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risks
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people
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 can hardly achieve their goals in life.
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, in my
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advantaged
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 outstrips the disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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