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Because of the global economy many goods including what we use on daily basics produce by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Over, the
last
 two-three decades there is tremendous growth in global trade because of the innovation in technology and individual are more reliable on imported products.
While
 some
people
 believe that
this
 is beneficial others have some doubts about it.
This
 essay will analyze both sides of the argument before arriving at a reasoned conclusion. There are certainly, several benefits of having import  product. The import of
goods
 improves the living standards.
Firstly
 we are able to use lots of varieties which are not available in our
nation
. Having mixtures of products leads to the use of good quality.In ,addition we have the option of a price match, as some
goods
 are expensive locally
while
 in other nations
people
 can get fewer prices. So the use of transported
goods
 improves not only daily life but
also
 make the rise in work.
Due to
 the requirement for ,
goods
 more jobs are available. One clear example is, In Canada transportation business is the biggest that they have. Many
people
 are dependent on these jobs.
However
, importing
goods
 brings so many benefits. On the flip side, transportation has some drawbacks. The most obvious is the cost of
goods
 transportation. These
goods
 are always expensive compared to local ones.
Moreover
, if imported
goods
 flood the local market, it will break the back of the local economy. If imported
goods
 are cheap than local ones. shopkeepers have to reduce the price because of that they will face loss in their business.
This
 will lead to unemployment.
People
 will be not able to pay taxes so
this
 way
nation
's economies face a reduction.
To conclude
, there are some benefits of using imported
goods
 but it causes to
nation
's growth, and environment. I believe that having both is good for the
nation
's growth.
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