In order to imporove the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their teachers, but other think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. What your opinion ?
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as well just to enhance their teaching strategies and their knowledge .
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, nowadays money matters more than a knowledge
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Consequently
, when those people get jobs they do not have any understanding of concepts . Similarly
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others , which could end up in developing a
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teachers
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professors without any hesitation . Change preposition
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However
, there should be specific evaluation
criteria in each institution to enhance the knowledge of lecturers as well , not from students
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authorities
To conclude
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students
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their elders either teachers
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