You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
letter is to inform you about a mistake I discovered while
reading one of the articles in the Dahab
Today book of the October 2022 edition.
Let me first specify the erroneous data. Although
I am an avid fan of Dahab
Today book, and I never missed reading any edition due to
the fact that all of the articles are informative , kindly note that in the section regarding “History of Dahab
” given on page number 36, paragraph 2, it is written that “old Dahab
was known for its Swedish architecture”
Secondly
, despite the fact that many readers may not recognize this
foul-up, I would like to correct this
pivotal information for you as it should be “old Dahab
is known for its Portuguese architecture”.
Finally
, given the fact that this
is very crucial information for Dahab
's history and may misguide readers, especially young ones, I request you amend the subject section in the subsequent edition.
Looking forward to hearing from you in
your earliest convenience.
Faithfully,
Manoj PandyaChange preposition
at
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