A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe •what the book was about explain •how this book influenced you •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Editor, I am writing to you regarding the request from readers to contribute to the article "The book that influenced me most" in your monthly magazine.

Firstly

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book was written by an Indian writer, Anita Desai. The book is, "Village by the sea", which is highly focused on the simple

life

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of a teenage girl who lives near the sea. It elaborates on the idea that how she and her siblings care for elders and how she sustains wisely from the day-to-day problems that arise in her

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, as a girl 25 years old, in , the past I mainly focused on materialistic things. I always wanted to buy several things in my

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, it is hard for someone to make me happy. But thanks to the writer, now I know the value of a simple

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. Now I know that happiness can not be achieved with the things that we buy ourselves.

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, as your magazine is targetting the youth, I assure you that

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article will drastically influence your thousands of young readers' minds. It will teach them how to enjoy every bit of their lives. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Mark Lee

silumidayawardanaSat Feb 18 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

203 words

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