You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter. •Explain why you would like this. •Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ. •Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in an advertisement that you are looking for a person who can take care of your six-year-old child and can stay with your family in Australia for half a year.

Firstly

, I would like to introduce myself, my name is Jessica and currently working as an internship childcare assistant at Skool4kidz which is one of the childcare centres in Singapore.

Moreover

, I am exploring overseas opportunities to upgrade my career and fortunately, Australia is one of the countries that I would like to visit and consider for migration.

Secondly

, there are a few factors that you can consider to hire me as a daycare person for your precious daughter or son.

Furthermore

, not only I am experienced in babysitting but

also

I have a professional certificate in Early Childhood Education which can support your kid to start his or her learning journey with me. On top of that, I enjoy spending time with the kids and I am a kind of patient, tidy, reliable and hardworking person. During my stay in Australia, I would like to spend my free time by learning online cooking classes, visiting tourist attractions and adapting to local cultures. If you need any

further

details and recommendations, please do not hesitate to contact me through email or my mobile number. Yours faithfully, Jessica Hninn.

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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