You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter. •Explain why you would like this. •Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ. •Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in an advertisement that you are looking for a person who can take care of your six-year-old child and can stay with your family in Australia for half a year.

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, I would like to introduce myself, my name is Jessica and currently working as an internship childcare assistant at Skool4kidz which is one of the childcare centres in Singapore.

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, I am exploring overseas opportunities to upgrade my career and fortunately, Australia is one of the countries that I would like to visit and consider for migration.

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, there are a few factors that you can consider to hire me as a daycare person for your precious daughter or son.

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, not only I am experienced in babysitting but

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I have a professional certificate in Early Childhood Education which can support your kid to start his or her learning journey with me. On top of that, I enjoy spending time with the kids and I am a kind of patient, tidy, reliable and hardworking person. During my stay in Australia, I would like to spend my free time by learning online cooking classes, visiting tourist attractions and adapting to local cultures. If you need any

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details and recommendations, please do not hesitate to contact me through email or my mobile number. Yours faithfully, Jessica Hninn.

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