Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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There are some countries that are in
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to establish high-end
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stadiums for the top athletes rather than generating
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and equipment that are available
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the public. I am of the opinion that
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is a negative development. There are a lot of people that are fond of
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. To some, it is already part of their everyday routine. On one hand,
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building a specialized facility for the top athletes is quite beneficial as they can enhance more of their current
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and techniques within their
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. For an instance, a fully air-conditioned court for playing basketball is highly beneficial for players as they can no longer be easily exhausted from heat during practice
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, giving them more motivation and power to enhance their talents.
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the place is already enhanced, there is a tendency that the owner or the person in charge of that building may require a fee for entrance or for maintenance whereby not all people have the means to pay for it and only those who can afford to pay can have the title to
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upgrade their skills.
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, producing an open
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public
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area
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can be beneficial for the majority since it can be free of use or payable
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affordable for many. It opens the opportunity for the mass to discover hidden talents in the field of
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.
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, it can establish a
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stronger bonds
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friends and family as they can have a mini get-together whenever they have
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spare time or during weekends.
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, community team building and activities can be held in that
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as well,
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firmer camaraderie and fellowship along the nation’s people can be mounted. In conclusion, generating specialized
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is highly appreciated to hone more of the skills of the
top-athletes
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but it can be only limited
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those who are able to pay
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fees.
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, public facility and equipment is limitless and is a door that opens possibilities and opportunities for many.
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, a high-class
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for
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can have a negative impact and development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • specialised facilities
  • train top athletes
  • international sports
  • boost
  • reputation
  • attract
  • sporting events
  • access
  • general public
  • inequality
  • opportunities
  • overemphasis
  • elite sports
  • neglect
  • grassroots development
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