The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line graph illustrates the various areas in the country of Europe that
was
visited by foreign tourists Change the verb form
were
in
Change preposition
from
year
1897 until 2007. They visited the lakes, Change the article
the year
mountain
and coast.
Fix the agreement mistake
mountains
Overall
, there are top
three tourist destinations in Europe. The coast had the highest view Correct article usage
the top
of
around 80 Change preposition
with
thousand
tourist
in 2007 Change to a plural noun
tourists
while
the the
mountain had only almost 40 Remove the redundancy
apply
thousand
in the same year
.
In 1987, the coast had a starting number of visitors in
about 40 Change preposition
of
thousand
. A gradual decline of roughly 35% was noted in the year
1992. As it reach the year
of
2007, it rose to twice as much as 80 Change preposition
apply
thousand
. Meanwhile, for the mountains
it started off with 20 Add a comma
,mountains
thousand
and a consistent minimal increase to almost 40 thousand
by the end of 2007.
For the lakes, it quadruples from ten to 40 thousand
subsequently
betwenn
1987 and 1997. Reaching Correct your spelling
between
it’s
peak in 2002 with almost 80 Replace the word
its
thousand
, it is also
noted a rapid decrease to roughly 50 thousand
in 2007.Submitted by kmaegalilee on
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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