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ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. test question

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. test question
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The bar chart illustrates the figure for
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 taken by youngsters in a particular country in a 20-year
period
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 from 1990 to 2010 to travel to and from school utilizing a wide range of means of transportation .The various modes of vehicles are separated into 5 categories which are car , walking , cycling , walking and bus.
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 , it can be seen clearly
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 the number of
trips
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 made by children using a car passenger followed an upward trend, the data for the remaining means of transportation experienced a downward tendency throughout the
period
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. Looking at the bar chart in more detail ,
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 the statistic of car passengers made by juveniles was the lowest in 1990 ( just over 4
million
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trips
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 ), the figure increased significantly 20 years later and reached the highest number of
trips
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 taken to travel to and from school ( more than 11
million
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trips
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 ) compared to the other vehicles .An opposite trend was witnessed in the data on walking , from approximately 12
milion
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million
trips
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 at the beginning of the
period
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 falling sharply to exactly 6
miilion
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million
trips
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at the end
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 of the stage . In terms of the three remaining modes of transport , in 1990 , the number of
trips
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 taken by students using cycling , walking and bus and only using the bus was around 6
million
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trips
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 , following a 20-year
period
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, these numbers decreased slightly to 2 , 3 and 5
million
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trips
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 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, period, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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