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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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In
this
 contemporary epoch,there is a heated argument over the view that in a number of ,community a lot of human beings prefer to rent their buildings rather than buy.In
this
 given-mentioned , phenomenon there are some points of merits and demerits,
However
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 both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph with a logical conclusion. There is adequate evidence of the advantages of renting a box.The first and foremost reason is a person does not have to invest a big amount of money as they can live in one condo with paying every month small money.Adding more to it people do not have to worry about household expenses
such
 as electricity bills or water bills because in most leased condominiums these all bills are lump-sum with the payment of a home.
Additionally
 living in rental apartments and penthouses people can move dwelling easily from one place to another because on the charter residence people won't buy so many householding things. On the other side , the drawback man should face so many problems in renting a building
such
 as always having to follow the instruction of their home ownership.
Moreover
,they are suffering from a lack of investment in their whole life.
Initially
, entities who live in a leased cave doesn't have any permanent stay to live.,
Besides
 that peoples have to take permission from the mansion owner before they have to do something in the shack.
To conclude
,nowadays in developed ,countries there are a lot of options for buying their own building
such
 as EmI instalment plans so,in
this
 modern generation masses should have to buy their own penthouse rather than living in hired flats.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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