Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet. While the internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational proposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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is acting as a boon for every age group in
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modern world by boosting their knowledge about any concept . It has been a topic of debate
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scholars should be allowed to use the
internet
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to access their educational
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or should be banned to use the same
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its few detrimental effects .
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am agreed with the positive side of using
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its drawbacks can not be ignored. To start with the
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vast information
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each and every concept in
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manner .
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can learn anything from Safari and Google etcetera to enhance their knowledge .
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every question related to any course ,
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it is providing ease to not only students but to elders as well to search
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courses that
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can pursue from their
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with flexible hours
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free of cost . In the contrast , these
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engines have negative aspects as well . On the top , the
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on these
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can not trust
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on the
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because
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there are ample
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sites
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for
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the students with unreliable information.
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is reducing the habit of manual reading from books in
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videos provided by the
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of clarifying the same notion by reading from various books .In
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it is
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the importance of literature in
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generation .To add on , it is promoting
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sedentary
lifestyle among youngsters , as they prefer to sit in front of screens for
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day which ends up
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various health ailments like weak eyesight and obesity and many more diseases.At
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but not least , there is not only educational
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on these social media
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but sometimes sensitive and inappropriate
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there , which can misguide
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delicate minds towards wrong things like drug addiction .
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am agreed with the notion that
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should be
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restricted
for students but we can not underestimate its benefits , so
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the
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engines , we can restrict the access
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the
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children
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