The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The given line graphs illustrate the percentage of
ownership
changes in three electrical equipment which are washing machine, Refrigerator and Vacuum Cleaner. The second graph depicts the number of
hours
spent on housework per
week
and per household from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
,it can be seen that amount of households with electrical appliances showed an upward trend during the given time period,
while
the number of
hours
spent on housework
such
as washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning has a downward trend. In detail, from 1920 to 2019
ownership
of refrigerators has increased to 100%, whilst Vacuum Cleaner
ownership
shows the same pattern of the
increasement
Correct your spelling
increment
.
Ownership
of washing mashing slightly increase their percentage to 70% in 1960 from the beginning, but slightly drop 10% in 1980.
Then
it has rise steadily to just above 70% in 2019.
A
Correct article usage
The
show examples
number of
hours
of housework per
week
, per household has decreased its
hours
during the given timeline from1920
to
Change preposition
from
show examples
2019 from 50%
hours
per
week
in1920 to 10% per
week
.
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