In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

In some countries, it is not common to rent a
home
,
however
, it is rather crucial, for citizens of these countries, to own their
place
for living. In
this
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I will argue that the comfort of owning a
house
or
apartament
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apartment
can be the cause of
this
and add an argument in
favor
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of buying
own
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your own
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propery
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property
properly
. Renting a
home
does not provide the same level of freedom as an own
place
does. By being a
tenent
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tenant
, it is paramount to adhere to the rules set by the owner. When you violate them it is very likely that the owner will evict you.
However
, owning an
appartment
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apartment
,
for example
, allows you to rebuild it, change the
overall
layout of the flat or add specific furniture.
Hence
, designing it to your taste.
Such
freedom can be especially
importont
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important
to some people, which have a very specific way of living influenced by their country’s culture.
Then
having their own
place
is crucial for them to feel comfortable. By buying a
home
, no money
are
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“wasted” on rent.
Although
renting a
place
can offer
a
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possibility to relocate to
different
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place
, from an economic point of view it is not a good choice. In
case
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of buying a
house
by taking a
mortage
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mortgage
, you are
also
paying monthly payments,
nonetheless
, you own the
place
and
thus
with every payment you lower your debt, but still retain the value in the form of the
house
,
while
rent is a pure expense. In conclusion,
to have
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the possibility to recreate own living space to one’s liking is driving people in some countries to possess their own
home
. What is more, given the financial advantage of buying
an
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own
house
instead
of renting, it is
also
beneficial for these people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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