The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart describes the survey’s outcomes regarding people’s

cofee

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coffee

and tea interest in

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the

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last

4 weeks in five Australian

cities

Overall

, going to a café for

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apply

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cofee

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coffee

or tea is the most popular option,

while

buying

instant

cofee

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coffee

and fresh

coffee

are second and

third,

respectivelly

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respectively

. The distribution is always in

this

order

exept

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except

for Adelaide, where buying

instant

coffee

has

higher

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a higher

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percentage

than visits to café. The highest

percentage

of city residents buying fresh

coffee

among all

cities

is in Sydney and it accounts for almost 45 %. In

Melbourne

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,Melbourne

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only

few

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a few

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percentage

points less of city residents buy fresh

coffee

. In

case

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the case

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of Brisbane and Adelaide, the consumption of fresh

coffee

considerable

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considerably

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lower than in other

cities

, both have slightly less than 35 %. The people in Hobart have the highest fraction

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buying

instant

coffee

attacking

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an attacking

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share of almost 55 %. The values for interest in

instant

coffee

fluctuates

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fluctuate

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between 45 % to around 52.5 % in the remaining 4

cities

. The most dominant component of visiting cafes for

coffee

and tea is the most popular in Melbourne with close to 65 %. Hobart and Sydney,

depicit

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depict

also

high

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have high

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values – both surpassing 60 % with

Hobart

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Hobart's

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percentage

being almost as in Melbourne. The lowest

percentage

for

this

answear

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answer

is in Adelaide with just under 50 %.

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