The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart describes the survey’s outcomes regarding people’s
cofee
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coffee
and tea interest in
a
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the
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last
4 weeks in five Australian
cities
.
Overall
, going to a café for
a
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apply
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cofee
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coffee
or tea is the most popular option,
while
buying
instant
cofee
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coffee
and fresh
coffee
are second and
third,
respectivelly
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respectively
. The distribution is always in
this
order
exept
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except
for Adelaide, where buying
instant
coffee
has
higher
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a higher
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percentage
than visits to café. The highest
percentage
of city residents buying fresh
coffee
among all
cities
is in Sydney and it accounts for almost 45 %. In
Melbourne
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,Melbourne
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only
few
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a few
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percentage
points less of city residents buy fresh
coffee
. In
case
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the case
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of Brisbane and Adelaide, the consumption of fresh
coffee
is
considerable
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lower than in other
cities
, both have slightly less than 35 %. The people in Hobart have the highest fraction
in
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of
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buying
instant
coffee
-
attacking
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an attacking
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share of almost 55 %. The values for interest in
instant
coffee
fluctuates
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fluctuate
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between 45 % to around 52.5 % in the remaining 4
cities
. The most dominant component of visiting cafes for
coffee
and tea is the most popular in Melbourne with close to 65 %. Hobart and Sydney,
depicit
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depict
also
high
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have high
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values – both surpassing 60 % with
Hobart
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Hobart's
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percentage
being almost as in Melbourne. The lowest
percentage
for
this
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answer
is in Adelaide with just under 50 %.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, instant, coffee, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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