To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
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food
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insects
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the benifits
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benefits
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. On
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food
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proven
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insect
impact
insects
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something
we're
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organisms
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insects
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populations
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by eating
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lose
loose
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lose
insects
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regulation
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regulations
behaviour
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behave
insects
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insect
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source
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that insect
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promote campaign
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the campaign
insects
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can use it with modaration
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moderation
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some animals like chicken or cows.Correct your spelling
managed
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