The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.,and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.,and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the
consumption
rate of three types of nutrients(
sodium
, saturated Fats and added sugars) on daily
meals
in the USA.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest
Consumption
of
sodium
and Saturated Fat were at
Dinner
,
While
added
sugar
was eaten too much in the snack
meals
. If we look at the charts, we can find that the highest
Consumption
average for
sodium
is about 43% for the
dinner
meal followed by Lunch
meals
which are accounted for 29%.
However
, the Breakfast
meals
and snacks both of them contain an equal amount of
sodium
around 14%.
Furthermore
, the large
Consumption
of Saturated Fat was in the
Dinner
and Lunch meal at 37% and 26% respectively.
In addition
, snack
meals
contain about 21% of saturated Fat but The Breakfast meal Can be considered a healthy meal because it contains only 16% of saturated Fat. the highest percentage of added
sugar
was in snack
meals
accounting for 42%. The
Dinner
Contain approximately 23%of added
Sugar
.
While
fewer amounts of
sugar
were added to the Breakfast and lunch
meals
at 16% and 19% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, sodium, meals, dinner, sugar with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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