The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.,and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the
consumption
rate of three types of nutrients(sodium
, saturated Fats and added sugars) on daily meals
in the USA.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest Consumption
of sodium
and Saturated Fat were at Dinner
, While
added sugar
was eaten too much in the snack meals
.
If we look at the charts, we can find that the highest Consumption
average for sodium
is about 43% for the dinner
meal followed by Lunch meals
which are accounted for 29%. However
, the
Breakfast meals
and snacks both of them contain an equal amount of sodium
around 14%.
Furthermore
, the large Consumption
of Saturated Fat was in the Dinner
and Lunch meal at 37% and 26% respectively. In addition
, snack meals
contain about 21% of saturated Fat but The Breakfast meal Can be considered a healthy meal
because it contains only 16% of saturated Fat.
the highest percentage of added sugar
was in snack meals
accounting for 42%. The Dinner
Contain approximately 23%of added Sugar
. While
fewer amounts of sugar
were added to the Breakfast and lunch meals
at 16% and 19% respectively.Submitted by deinaomahmed44 on
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