Some people think that the individuals who make the most money are the most successful. Others believe that the most successful are those who contribute to society, such as scientists and teachers. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

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society is

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great

success

. In my opinion, I consider that successful is

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is the successful mean to somebody. I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraph. In

this

present time,

money

is the

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great

power for many,

for example

, if someone

have

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more

money

he can buy what he

want

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,

in addition

, the lifestyle will be more

comfort

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, with more

money

no need for work, most of

people

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will be lazy and bad effects may happen,

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obesity and high pressure. Some people have a lot of

money

that they inherited from their parents,

therefore

, their life will come easily. they can travel

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buying precious things.

such

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Jewelry, phone, shoe,

bag

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is no denying that

money

is important.

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, The successful is the value that the person is have and give,

for instance

, if someone

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teacher

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the teacher

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he has

responsibility

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the responsibility

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to share his

knwledge

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knowledge

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his community,

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,

this

generation will be more

education

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educated

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,

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, some individual

say

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that

success

for the

success

it self

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, so not for

money

or other things, I completely agree with

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state

ment

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meant

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TO

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conclude,

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,

money

is crucial, sharing

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society is the most successful for

person

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a person

the person

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.

the

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success

is comes

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first

then

money

at

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second,