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With the increase of digital media available online the role of the library has become obsolete University should provide digital material rather than textbooks Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view

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In the contemporary world, people are engineered by nature and nurture to follow the tracks of technology.
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 are being replaced by
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books
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 and online articles. Some people
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 that Universities should supplant hardcopy information with digital materials. It is irrefutable that there are both pros and cons
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the advantages and disadvantages of surging digital media usage before stating an opinion. (1) To commence with the facet of agreement, there is a myriad of things that needs to
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 in its favour. Primarily, digital
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 are much
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cheaper and
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does not
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physical ones. Often, textbooks conquer a colossal amount of space.
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, the library in QUT, in Queensland, occupies four stories which account for more than 3000 square meters. Owing to the high
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philanthropic
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investment
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large
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,
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 are more
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convenient
.
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, Physical
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 are prone to damage and need replacement more often.
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,
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books
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 a
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 saves a
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 of money. The savings from
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 can be invested in building better labs and other
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facilities
 in University.
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, it is estimated that each year Universities in Australia spend more than 3 billion dollars
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 replacing old and damaged
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. (8) Shifting towards the second school of thought, digital materials, unless
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specific, leads to infobesity in students.
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 can lead to
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 of vital information
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 and fancies of the authors, leading to bemusement in health promotion professionals and graduates.
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,
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 technology to run
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 course, which is sometimes not a practical option for developing and under-developed countries.
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, long-term usage of
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books
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 can lead to chronic eye
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 like
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computer vision syndrome,
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 can
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permanently
 damage the vision acuity of kids. To
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illustrate
, each year more than 1 million cases of computer vision syndrome and associated damage are
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reported globally
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 excessive usage of
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computers
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 and mobile phones. (6) In conclusion, the two sides of the
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argument
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tradition
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books
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 have strong support.
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, after a thorough analysis of
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both sides, I believe that the
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advantages
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books
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 inundate the hardcopy
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. (3)
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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