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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Many folks think that accepting
unsatisfying
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 situation is better,
whereas
 others believe that trying to overcome the situation is the best solution. In my opinion,
people
 should fight to rise from the problems in their
lives
.
People
 tend to accept bad
situations
 mainly because of their lower level of motivation. In other words, folks who lack
of
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self confidence
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 often try to settle down with negative
situations
. For an instance, some individuals choose the most unsatisfying occupation and suffer for the rest of their
lives
. Another example is that some
people
, do not fight back when they get
lower
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 amount of money in their jobs which makes their
lives
 even harder.
Instead
 of accepting a hard situation,
people
 should boost their motivation to improve their
lives
.
However
, there is an increasing number of
people
 who face hard times successfully and achieve better results. They make
counter actions
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 to tackle horrible problems, and
as a result
, they surpass the stress of being in a problem. For
an
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example, if someone doing an awful job, that person can boost
up
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his/her skills in order to get a better job.
Besides
, if someone experiences issues
in
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 income, the best option would be to work hard or to change the job which can increase the income. In my opinion, bad
situations
 are great opportunities for
people
 to understand and identify their potential.
In addition
, improving horrible time periods or
situations
 in life
,
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 leads to
improve
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entire
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 society and the country in the long run.
To conclude
,
people
 should try to improve bad
situations
 in their
lives
instead
 of accepting
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. It is true that they are some additional
effort
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 to make but the end result will be much
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more satisfying
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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