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The bar chart shows percentages from a study of residents who purchased coffee and tea, in five metropolitan areas of Australia, within the last four weeks.

The bar chart shows percentages from a study of residents who purchased coffee and tea, in five metropolitan areas of Australia, within the last four weeks.
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The bar chart illustrates how many people in five cities in Australia purchase beverages
such
 as
coffee
 and tea.
Overall
, the majority of all city dwellers visited
to
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a café for
coffee
 or tea in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
,
whereas
 the number of those who purchased instant
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
were
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 the least throughout all cities. The most outstanding feature of
this
 chart is the percentage of customers who went to a café for
coffee
 or tea in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
, which
were
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all accounted for over 55% except those who live in Adelaide (approximately 50%). The proportion of Hobart is the highest percentage among the people who enjoyed instant
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
 which constitute roughly 55%. Sydney and
Melbourne
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 residents had similar habits of drinking
while
 Brisbane and
Adelaide
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Adelaide's
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 dwellers were
also
 alike. The former group of people had more fresh
coffee
 or visited a café for
beverage
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a beverage
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 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
more
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than the latter group.
However
, the latter group of consumers had more instant
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
 (around 53% and 50%, respectively).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, weeks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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