The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after f inishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after f inishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie chart illustrates the job which Anthropology graduates from a particular university chose after they finished their undergraduate degree course and the table compares the amount of money that graduates received after 5 years'
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, it can be seen clearly that most university students followed full-time
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just a small proportion of them chose to
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as freelancers, the higher salaries come from freelance consultants in comparison with private companies . Looking at the given pie chart for more detail ,
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52% of Anthropology graduates pursued a career as a full-time worker , the money that they got was the lowest compared to the other careers , just $50'000-74,999 .The figure for the student who chose to
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full-time postgrad study
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or part-time
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is by far smaller than that of those who are unemployed (less than 8%) , and the salaries they received is very high ( $100,000+)
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, the percentage of people who graduated from university without having a constant job accounted for 8% of the pie chart , the money that they earned is really high , just after the government sector (+$100,000)
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