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The diagram displays how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane.

The diagram displays how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane.
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The diagram illustrates how
sugar
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 is made from
sugar
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 cane. There are seven steps to finish
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 method. First of all, the
sugar
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canes
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 need to be grown for 12 to 18 months to be cultivated. After
the
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 long period, the fully grown
sugar
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canes
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cane
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 are cultivated by special tractors. They can
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 be cultivated directly by farmers.
Then
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, they put the harvested
sugar
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canes
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cane
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 into the machine, crush it, and extract its
juice
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. After that, the extracted
juice
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 needs to be purified, so they are put into a limestone filter.
Following
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this
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, the purified
juice
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 is placed in the evaporator and is heated by a hot fire.
While
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 they are heated, the
juice
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 is transformed into
syrup
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 as the water evaporates. Once
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 process is done, the syrup of
sugar
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canes
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 is separated from
sugar
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 crystals by centrifuge.
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, after they are dried and cooled down, they become
sugar
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.
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