Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

It has been argued that
bad
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a bad
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situation occurs ,but what is
more bad
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is to set still, and do nothing to
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Enhance
it .
However
, others say that it is better to accept it rather than
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to find
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solutions
.In my opinion, I agree with those who believe in improving their lives constantly.
furthermore
, I will elaborate
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views and give examples.
To begin
, individuals
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think that a man should be satisfied with what he has. They are convinced
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of
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this
notion for several reasons.
Firstly
, They may think that trying to
inhance
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enhance
the situation may lead to
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worsening
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it.
In other words
, if they didn't thank god, they may lose What they
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.
secondly
, some people are just lazy to do anything ,so they
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convinced
theirselves
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themselves
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with these words rather than try to find
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out what
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have
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has
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gone wrong.
on the other hand
, other people can't set still and do nothing as they tend to be hard
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workers
these humans can't accept a bad situation.
For example
,
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a student
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student
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students
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in
the
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apply
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college do their best to pass their
examies
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exams
eventhough
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even though
they get
low
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the low
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score
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scores
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they will keep trying to improve their marks.
while
,others
studen
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student
will just
surander
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surrender
, and stop Studying and may drop out college.
to conclude
, some people are
to
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lazy to develop themselves
whereas
other spend the
whol
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whole
day. working, assuming that the
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difference
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between These 2
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groups
,
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apply
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are
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is
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their ways of thinking.
Whereas
, the first group tend to find excuses for their
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failure
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,
while
the second group are energised and
try
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tries
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to find new ways to develop.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution reduction
  • accountable
  • cleaner technologies
  • tax revenue
  • environmental projects
  • mitigate pollution
  • stricter regulations
  • public awareness campaigns
  • behavior change
  • sustainable practices
  • incentives
  • green technology adoption
  • negative economic consequences
  • alternative methods
  • enforcement
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