The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The Table illustrates. The
number
of children those was
attended Four secondary schools in the years 2000, 2005 and 2009.
Change the verb form
were
Overall
, it can be seen that The attendance ratio in the Community school
increased throughout the given period of time while
the attendance percentages decreased in the other three schools.
In detail, The percentage of children who attend The community school
dramatically rose from 12%, in the year
2000 To 32% in the year
2005.Followed by a sharp increase in 2009 to account for 58%.
on the other hand
, there was a significant decrease in the attendance percentages in the other 3 schools. Obviously, in 2000 the pupils who attended voluntary school
accounted for 52%,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
dropped to 33% after 3 years. In 2009, there was a sharp decline in the number
of students in the school
representing only 20% .In The Grammar school
the Add a comma
,school
number
of people whose
attended was 24 % in the Correct pronoun usage
who
year
2000 and then
declined slightly to 19% and 12% in the year
2005 and 2009 respectively.
finally
, specialist school
shows a gradually fell in the number
of children whose study in that school
12%,11% and 10% throughout the given years.Submitted by deinaomahmed44 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, school, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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